Please rate my sexy art!

[Dynamo_200000]

So I helped my friend who is very skilled in anime type art and we built an sexy bond type image (link below) and want to go ahead and make more. I just wanted some feedback from people about the image and to say what they do like/dislike about it and what is the general scenario from what you can tell and whats happening? and what are the expressions and actions like? and the colors. Its for adults only:

http://www.imagebam.com/image/9fa462279694119 #

Please try and be serious ty I am after feedback and thoughts/ideas even. Ty!

 

[luis1972]

next....

 

[squallumz]

the kid sniffing the boot is the icing on the cake.

 

[nastyfalcon]

If this was "his" artwork, why did he blur out her best feature?

 

[LucyOHara]

Better as it was this way, IMO.

 

[amnenadrom]

Better as it was this way, IMO.

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Messy pic for such a clean model.

Anyways, kids in the pic are odd. Also, the additional portions lack the sheen highlights of the original so they look like additions. Boot sniffing is amusing.

 

[JasonCook78]

Meh.

 

[Funboy88]

why's it censored?!!!!!

 

[squallumz]

why's it censored?!!!!!

its a play on japanese mosaic censoring.

 

[DP_LOVER]

the boot sniffing kid wierds me out!

 

[MarriedMan]

Lucy is so awesome.

 

[herooftheporn]

i like the idea ...

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i like the idea ...

 

[squallumz]

speaking of lucy, ive been spanking it non stop to lucy heartfilia and erza scarlet hentai.

i have a problem.