so im new at websits

[StanScratch]

Have several friends look over your spelling and punctuation. And, advertising your site on your site is kind of counterproductive.

 

[Ulysses31]

Have several friends look over your spelling and punctuation. And, advertising your site on your site is kind of counterproductive.

That's a pretty tall order already

 

[turtle825]

Constructive criticism: you're too focused on flashy gadgets. Those never make a website. You are technicly proficient in putting them there... which is good. But that alone is not why people come to a website.

/S

This. You won't go too far taking the "all style & no substance" approach like Michael Bay

 

[Mr Dragon]

all my fired saids it was good i just had to fix the enter page and i did so they said it was good

 

[Shifty]

Well, you know what they say: a good fired is hard to find.

 

[SpexyAshleigh]

Well, you know what they say: a good fired is hard to find.

Tell me about it, I'm still lookin

 

[Mr Dragon]

well what does my site need like i need to know what to add ans remove i need a desinger or some thing i want it to be alsome i think its good but hell what do i know

 

[SpexyAshleigh]

well what does my site need like i need to know what to add ans remove i need a desinger or some thing i want it to be alsome i think its good but hell what do i know

your site is fine, you just need to learn how to SPELL properly, use proper grammar and sentence structure and use punctuation. Thats what everyone is saying...your site looks good for your first attempt but it looks like a 5 yr old made it just based on your spelling and stuff.

 

[LukeEl]

Websites are the Devil's electronic social network!

 

[Mr Dragon]

well can some one help me tell me what needs to be speel right or what ever

 

[Tittyman5000]

To be 100% honest & not mean in any way It sux, what are you thinking? Are you trying to earn money or do you lack attention? I don't want to criticize but if your serious I feel sorry 4 u

 

[Deepcover]

Reminds me of an old 70's retro website. You'll get better.

 

[Mr Dragon]

i dont know what to do now to my site

 

[busenbust]

i dont know what to do now to my site

improve it ?

 

[Mr Dragon]

how like i nee d a diser to help a little like some one to help me a little what do i need to chage and i will do

 

[alexpnz]

how like i nee d a diser to help a little like some one to help me a little what do i need to chage and i will do

 

[TheOrangeCat]

how like i nee d a diser to help a little like some one to help me a little what do i need to chage and i will do

What

The

Fuck????

 

[xfire]

how like i nee d a diser to help a little like some one to help me a little what do i need to chage and i will do

 

[enndaley]

Is there actually a Blog there? If there is, it's well camouflaged...camoflougaed...well hidden.

 

[Tittyman5000]

how like i nee d a diser to help a little like some one to help me a little what do i need to chage and i will do

First off, Use a capital letter to start sentences (how - How) a single i should also be capitalized (i - I) guessing nee d doesn't need a space, and a diser WTF is that, maybe you meant designer? Plus you say little twice when only one is necessary, Then either a coma or a period ( , or .) Capitalize the (W -What) again the (i - I) chage is misspelled its change, again the (i - I) Question mark ( ? ). Also there is two helps and two like's when only one is necessary.

And this is only the correction for this sentence..............

How like I need a designer, some one to help me a little. What do I need to change and I will do?